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6 s# R# y% z0 f6 x5 Y原版远方《留学恋歌》原创系列-译写3 ^; r/ z. ?/ e2 l, {. D4 T9 u

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【序】-应邀为一国际华人某医学协会写一首会歌。写给为人类生命医学做贡献的华人医生及医学科学家们。
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3 l+ J4 Q* e7 T' _0 I+ J-He wrote the original one in Chinese. E version, done without delay after read his text. Above lines made me feel it's a song devoted to some Chinese Doctors and scientists whose work contributed to the life science of mankind, from this side of the ocean. 7 c7 I7 ^6 N0 z+ p
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原版远方, -He writes authentically, only when he sees something emotional, and touching his heart. I did once, when the quake hit the Wen-chuan China 2008, really hard to look at the lines as there were tears in the eyes...

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"A bridge built, called miracle"
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走遍天涯 追寻梦想
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每个细胞都充满希望5 D" j- X9 ]( j: C0 S1 `: P
让无悔的青春闪烁光芒
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Sun shines from south to north, we dream a dream,
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shines the hope, in every pause, and every cells
& E- U" O, }9 h1 yshines, forever, A pretty girl in spring,  morning, brings a miracle, # w0 T2 L/ k( C6 r# X
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走过曲折 志在四方
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让宝贵的生命更加坚强! z0 H" k* R  p2 c' ^, ]$ x& N/ F' y1 x, s8 E
Old countries and cities new, left behind, wills like steel,
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9 Y, w; W+ Y, ~, z% w" X4 W$ wOn our shoulders, the spring morning dew,  
& z) m- u, E/ F8 R, O- J) Y1 ]Like waves cares the land, Oh, spring girl1 i9 K/ X8 @' v: ~% Q
Angle's lips warm, sweet, never cold
9 i5 b5 s+ j  x: ~5 ]( jShe sings a song, that make you strong, when u weakened, and poor, , K2 @  _; t  B0 y

+ j1 O% y  {/ l6 n- g架起连通中西的桥梁2 ^8 p1 D4 x& q1 U- r( o) g2 j* f
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拼搏创新造就成功殿堂
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6 ^0 e/ h2 |' z, ?) K; oAcross East and West, A bridge, we built, called miracle,
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We try and discover, the Gold, in a century well,
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Hand in hand, time grow old, we go, Oh, ) P$ _  \) `3 Y. C  b- z5 {
we produce miracle, A new birth, of a brilliant tomorrow) M# J( f, n2 A. R- [
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Photo, by 四川 爱思网 石川先生,Authorized by 24en.com, zhou
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8 X+ Q; ?  O" Y6 R+ ^1 Y* C【译后的话】赠此次
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0 M7 q' j) U* d$ M( w安大略省 大专院校 汉语辩论大赛 的同学们和评委老师誌念!3 _; t# h7 ~: t6 e8 o/ D6 u

& z3 m" H1 ]  O3 f' h Yesterday, I read one text message from one of the Cyber-freinds who wrote
0 [) O+ ]/ P( L0 |9 V& L' \ many songs and poems in ChinaGate, 中国文学城, 北美较大华语网,his name is: 原版远方, I did once his song, during the 中国汶川震灾!& w7 X; o/ y4 ]" l0 a8 ^3 O

) \2 b: ~  Q5 f) P" V6 o- O 今天的论题,使我想起了他!他邀我试译,一首汉语歌词。受你们论辩的激情和活力的激励,我一气呵成,成了一首 【译写】-汉诗英韵. "A bridge, built, called miracle" 赠给我在本次活动中, 遇见的所有同学和评委老师们,
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以致纪念!
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Read original, 9 i6 P& r" z2 G$ M
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-29 17:00 | 显示全部楼层

Maybe they don't really like it!

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I don't know, maybe people are shy? Maybe people don't really enjoy it! % W, p9 Q7 I- z3 T: q; Z5 e
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