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发表于 2010-3-20 23:27 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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( Z* B3 S( c# {! b原版远方《留学恋歌》原创系列-译写$ ~8 n% P! c' f& C! Q  L

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/ d( O; ~( {5 H# \【序】-应邀为一国际华人某医学协会写一首会歌。写给为人类生命医学做贡献的华人医生及医学科学家们。
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) Q1 c) `, L/ ]& C/ i-He wrote the original one in Chinese. E version, done without delay after read his text. Above lines made me feel it's a song devoted to some Chinese Doctors and scientists whose work contributed to the life science of mankind, from this side of the ocean. : c3 S9 d9 W! s2 o2 K' F

) w) S- h) [) u; @7 z# c原版远方, -He writes authentically, only when he sees something emotional, and touching his heart. I did once, when the quake hit the Wen-chuan China 2008, really hard to look at the lines as there were tears in the eyes...

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"A bridge built, called miracle" 2 v0 g, }, O/ R: ~& [# k! E! L

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展开翅膀 勇敢地飞翔. w1 ^7 M% I, H' X- O/ P- G
每个细胞都充满希望
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in darkest nights, stars like Angle's eyes, blinks bravo,4 ?2 W# h% l7 z  a4 Z$ d/ b
shines the hope, in every pause, and every cells
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Old countries and cities new, left behind, wills like steel,
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On our shoulders, the spring morning dew,  / G- G" J8 O% ~- R' ~
Like waves cares the land, Oh, spring girl
/ Q9 ~5 {( S4 s4 fAngle's lips warm, sweet, never cold
# b: k8 R7 j7 Y5 g; ?She sings a song, that make you strong, when u weakened, and poor, $ |7 q) q5 C0 j% c# i# w# L& c

! ~: s! G. p) b! O0 d- J! t架起连通中西的桥梁. l+ f! H$ U' T: G( |
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4 H8 }) r% g* I. [$ `' k- ZAcross East and West, A bridge, we built, called miracle, " u& t2 {4 S5 }& b& q4 w% F9 d
We walk in schools, we talk to fruits in the garden full, 9 F5 \. s1 _# \# p" N
We try and discover, the Gold, in a century well, & i5 a6 }- ?( x9 O+ R) ?4 o
search, from deep heart to an inner soul,
% i- S, I3 ]$ f& M8 ?- lHand in hand, time grow old, we go, Oh,
# {  X# a5 X& ~2 Z" E3 Lwe produce miracle, A new birth, of a brilliant tomorrow
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# ^3 u% ?: N& V# q0 f9 f6 r# i+ q安大略省 大专院校 汉语辩论大赛 的同学们和评委老师誌念!9 A8 h) V' ^8 M
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Yesterday, I read one text message from one of the Cyber-freinds who wrote 3 Q; ]- d2 ~/ b% \8 s, t' q
many songs and poems in ChinaGate, 中国文学城, 北美较大华语网,his name is: 原版远方, I did once his song, during the 中国汶川震灾!+ D# Q, Z+ ]" D& J; t" ]
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今天的论题,使我想起了他!他邀我试译,一首汉语歌词。受你们论辩的激情和活力的激励,我一气呵成,成了一首 【译写】-汉诗英韵. "A bridge, built, called miracle" 赠给我在本次活动中, 遇见的所有同学和评委老师们,
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Read original,
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本帖最后由 hijames 于 2015-8-31 20:59 编辑
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' i2 C9 e; {1 h1 tgood, but why people doesnt comment?8 }+ S, c2 q3 I5 D: X2 r
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-29 17:00 | 显示全部楼层

Maybe they don't really like it!

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I don't know, maybe people are shy? Maybe people don't really enjoy it!
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